Popular events like the football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way.
The existence of international sport events such as World Cup, Sea Games and Para Games are waited by not only athlete around the world but also citizen of the world. In order to support their favorite team which also represent their country, some supporter are even willing to come to the venue of the games though it is very far from the country where they live in.
There are some reasons that cause this phenomenon. One of the reasons is it can be a patriotism symbol to the country. Some athletes become the image of the country so they always do their best to win the game. As a p...
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are waited by not only athlete around the world but also citizen of the world.
are waited by not only athletes around the world but also citizens of the world.
In order to support their favorite team which also represent their country
In order to support their favorite teams which also represent their country
The related country will not hesitant to give such rewards
The related country will not hesitate to give such rewards
the process of encouraging the athletes who fight in the games definitely categorized as a great step to achieve.
the process of encouraging the athletes who fight in the games is definitely categorized as a great step to achieve.
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