Development has taken place at a rapid rate due to LPG. Many Multinational Companies have been set up in cities due to relaxation in various foreign policies and thus providing Job opportunities for many. The MNC's or entrepreneur's like to set up in cities for the easy availability of raw material and facilities and other business convenience which is otherwise not available in rural areas which therefore leads to less cost and increase in profit.
Though this has led to removal of unemployment and provided new opportunities but at the same time it has also led to uneven over population and over- crowd at a particular place. This unplanned growth has played an adverse effect on environment and natural resources. As people migrate to city they settle and construct house and Apartments for dwelling which requires cutting of trees and removal of lakes. Air gets polluted due to diminishing of trees and increase in number of harmful smoke emitting vehicles. Less and narrow road accommodating more people and vehicles in cities leads to higher traffic which again wastes huge amount of time. Production of resources for a large group of people causes higher rate of living in cities.
These problems can be resolved by focusing on equal and planned growth and development of the country.Every state or region of a country has it's own unique identity or potential which are not totally ignored. For Example, tourism can be encouraged in many under-developed but historical rich or natural scenic places. Incentives from the government to MNC's and entrepreneurs to support business in less potential areas. MSME sector can be encouraged and supported by the government.
At the End, I would conclude by saying that there should be proper and balanced development and it is not only the responsibility of government or any social organisation but also the responsibility of every individual to come forward in every step for the betterment of the society and country to encourage equal growth thus providing and building a safer and healthy environment for our future generation.
- Some people think that the government should ban all forms of dangerous sports; others believe that people should be free to make decisions for themselves. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. （2011年7月30日A类） 56
- The population of most cities is growing as people move to cities to find work and new opportunities. What problem does over population in cities cause? How can these problems be solved? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 103, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Every
...d growth and development of the country.Every state or region of a country has its ow...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, therefore, thus, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 30.0 10.4138276553 288% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14662756598 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01034356312 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574780058651 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.6384539024 49.4020404114 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.357142857 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3571428571 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162156177174 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491513089992 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383079251185 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0827239415508 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488358420782 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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