The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people now experience, such as, juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that married women now work and are not at home to care for their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
In the last two decades the phenomenon has aroused wide concern over the women’s place in communities. Many nations have been faced with teenage problems, whereas, mothers are not allocating sufficient time for nurturing youth due to the job responsibilities. From my aspects of illustration, this issue has contributed to the high rate of crime among grown-ups. The impact of female on youth will be discussed below before a reasoned conclusion is drawn.
Women are responsible in looking after their children. From the international human rights convention is known that children up to 18 years old must be in parents’ response. In addition, the baby is compared with space memory, in term of development, whenever, information is recorded, this device saves it as long as possible, also human intelligence does it too. Providing that youth should be treated with crucial and reliable source from close people, especially, mothers. Therefore, spending more time for children rather than work could be appropriate.
Nevertheless, many married women work to better the life of their children. For instance, the presence of one-parent families in a country is not secret. Considering this fact above mothers have to work as an only supporter of a family, whereas, to concentrate on both home and work is hard, especially, in competitive world. Moreover, the study fees of children should be paid regularly in order to continue their studies. However, there are families with both folks, unfortunately, their wages are not enough to provide whole individuals at home. Thus, it requires men and women to work equally to overcome this issue.
In conclusion, in spite of the regulation that parents are responsible to care for a child, the condition of a family should be taken in to consideration.
- Most education systems rely on examination to encourage children to study but as a result children suffer from too much stress and never learn to be creative Therefore examinations should be abolished Do you agree 78
- The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people now experience, such as, juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that married women now work and are not at home to care for their children 73
- The graph below gives information about international tourist inbounds in five countries from 1995 to 2010. 78
- Some people think Governments should take measures regarding the healthy lifestyle of individuals Others think it must be managed by individuals Discuss both sides and give your opinion 59
- The graph below gives information about international tourist arrivals in five countries. 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 317, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'longs'?
Suggestion: longs
...on is recorded, this device saves it as long as possible, also human intelligence do...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, whereas, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28719723183 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07319425588 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61937716263 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8136363466 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0625 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5625 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201975998639 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690080294282 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636501616117 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108832531926 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616338861585 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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