The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years.Many of the problems young people now experience, such as Juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is a fact that, for the development of a country the job availability is increasing for both men and women. Therefore, the positions of women in society has changed but in the past women worked at home and they had responsibilities on their family. Simultaneously there was a patriarchy in the past society. Nowadays the positions for both men and women are treated equally. Unluckily, while the married women go to work their children are misbehaving and they will not be able to share their feelings. Due to this situation, number of crimes and violence are rising such as "Juvenile Delinquency"...
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Sentence: Married women have to stop work and stay at home of ought to separate a long time for their children education as well as their future life while they are working.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to children and education
Sentence: For instance when children watch violence movies, programs and offences they try to do experiments with those and specifically ot would be the foundation for the increase of crimes.
Error: ot Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Otherwise it would be full-fill with crimes in the universe.
Error: full-fill Suggestion: fulfill
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Category: Good Excellent
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Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.497 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.721 4.6
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