At the present time, artificial intelligence of some technologies is advancing rapidly, especially in the driving sector. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
In thesedays, due to advancement of technology it upgrade the various features in driving sector, this include auto driving. it has both advantages along with disadvantages for human life which i will explain in the upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with the reasons why this technology is beneficial for public the first and foremost reason behind this is that, it can reduce the chances of road accidents. To elaborate robots are feeling less and they only concentrate on thing which is comanded. to than as comfort with human, they can easly distract by anything such as music or person while driving due to which, they have to face chances like as accidents but if car operated by robot then, they can soul from that type of misshappening. Adding on, this technology also beneficial for saving the time such as, if people driving car so, they definitely attract tourords the things or shaps on thge road side, they also would like to stop. But, in the some way if car operated by computer then it maily focus on destination which people select and no chances of distraction.
On the flip side, there are some disadvantges of this technology the pioner one is that, it cover increase the number of unemployment. To explain, when conforly provide that feature in their car then , nobody like to hire to drivers becouse they do not need to spend extra money for them, they already have that function in their car therefore, it can create unemployment which leads to increase poverty line, Another one fact is that people can addict with this technology such as, when they can easly got that type of facilites so they totaly depend on technology, which is not good for their health.
To conclude, this new technology has their own advantges for people but it also has some disadvantges which cannot be ignored so it is responsibility of humans they should not depend upon technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, therefore, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85758513932 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.641519157 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544891640867 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.727334874 49.4020404114 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 156.9 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.3 20.7667163134 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141069690931 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071617142453 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534391989948 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10763333389 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510491796177 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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