Today more countries import food from different part of the world. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this modern era, transportation of food becoming more controversial with many individuals claiming that it is good thing, while other think it has negative development. I will explain both points in the subsequent paragraph.
To commence with, the reasons why some people are not in the favour of this development first and foremost reason is that , it creat a lot of pollution. To elaborate, transportation of food is dangerous for both environment as well as sea life as it need vehicles to transport the things which create a numerous pollution such as studies are also show that in every year near by 500 species of marine life died because of transport oil via oceans. Adding on, the another one point is that companies use various chemicals in the food item to expend their expiry date it may cause the human health because these are not natural things therefore it good for individuals to avoid the usage of that products into their daily life.
On the fence side, of the reasons why it is good for the nation pioneer one is that it make job opportunities for local people. To explain, import and export system need huge amount of labour for packaging and checking the food goods, that is why it can help to provide income source to needy people so they can full fill their basic needs and also can help to grow the economy of nation. Secondly, it is good way to taste the cousins of different countries and also can promote their food items in another nations and earn money. For example, there are many people settled in another countries so it is good opportunity for them, they can taste their native food in any nation.
To conclude, whether food import and export has some disadvantages but it also has various pros which outweigh the cons of this trend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70192307692 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52485526301 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554487179487 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.562800387 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.7 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132254869797 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589465308531 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465744914999 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0937216087178 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428247108971 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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