At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
In this contemporary era, it has always been debatable topic that which group of people are more contributing to their nation. A section of society vehemently believe that dwellers, more than 25 year and less than 35 year, are noticeably high compared to other older age group.Moreover, both have its boon and bane. This essay outlines the both sides of such trend.
Admittedly, young people are the backbone of the country. To embark on, they are immensely energetic to pursue any job they like or they are given. Secondly, they are more adoptive to new change occur, in this ultra modern epoch, comparing to older generations. To exemplify, in some countries, such as USA, Canada and Germany, they give so many opportunities to patronize their adults in order to achieve success for individual as well as country. Finally, it is deliberated, by many, that young ones produce more creative thinking, which is one of the dominant reason, why some nation stimulate such citizens.
On the other hand, aged people have seen so much throughout their life that proffer them abundant experiences to make decisions precisely than other. To illustrate this, take example of India, where most of its leaders are aged because they deem that it will beneficial for them if they are led by such highly experience persons. Furthermore, young ones, sometimes, persist something in haste and fantasies, whereas, such scenario in unfeasible with old one, they think more practical rather then going with rush. Henceforth, it can be said that in time of critical circumstances having a bolster of such people provide fruitful result.
In recapitulation, both side have its own pros and cons, therefore, it can not be considered that one is extravagant for country to other.
In my opinion, it is better to prioritize proper one for various chores or duties.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06885245902 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77626907579 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632786885246 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8275939511 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.428571429 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7857142857 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0714285714 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0874809780774 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0320533675824 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0241429114655 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0415973675111 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262110869677 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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