At present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
The countries with a relatively large population of young adults, compared to older people have a distinct advantages over the countries that do not. Young adults have much higher energy than older people. This translates to a better awareness in their lives as well as a high awareness in terms of the welfare of the society and the country as a whole.
Such countries, generally, have a high social index, a high economic index, and a better standard of living. The reason being that young adults are the working class of the country. They are it's economic powerhouse. Any institution or an entity or a country in this day and age cannot survive without a stable source of income. That is exactly what the young adults or the working class provide for the country-stability and economic balance. These countries also tend to have robust political and economic institutions. A great example of such a country is of course India. 65% of India's population is below the age of 35. About 70% of those are below the age of 25. While the average age in Japan and U.S. are approaching the 40's; the average age in India is still 25. This brings enormous amount of possibilities for countries like India.
The only thing required for such countries is to educate and help foster a sense of independence in the young adults. And they have to do it fast, because young adults will not stay young forever. That is perhaps the only impediment for such countries- the fact that whatever they plan to do, they must do it now.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, still, well, while, of course, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67790262172 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62107536146 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50936329588 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5592115122 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.4705882353 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7058823529 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218854596839 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694934511105 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.088243659464 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174526033175 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0999692441792 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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