At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
Youth is considered to be the future of any country, as they likely tend to be more active and energetic. Nevertheless, many young generations eradicated whole countries because of their childish mentalities. This essay is going to discuss the advantages and disadvantages of young people being the majority in a country's demographics.
Although young people are full of enthusiasm, they are also hasty and always in a hurry to reach their goals. They need guidance from experienced people in order to minimise any prospected problems, that young people might put themselves into. For instance, a graduate, who took a loan, decides to start a business, which is in his field of expertise. Initially, he achieved a decent profit that lured him to invest more money. Thus, he never hesitated and put all his money into the investment. Unfortunately, he lost everything even became bankrupt. If he had consulted an expert, who had similar experiences in this field, he would have taken a better decision. Therefore, the decreasing numbers of seasoned adults can have a dramatic effect not only on the economy but also on any other domain that applies the idea.
Notwithstanding anything to the contrary, a country cannot progress without youth in its population. This age group is capable of introducing innovative ideas, because they always have a better education than older generations. If this approach fails to be true, many European countries would close its gates to young immigrants. Instead, they are facilitating the process of immigration of young professionals, as they are in need of them due to their lack of this specific age group. For example, the average age in Germany is around 80 years. Would it open its door unless it is beneficial for its progress and welfare? Consequently, young people are a vital resource of any nation, which its scarceness is a symptom of possible future instability in any country.
All in all, a typical age-based dempgraphic of a nation must have a balance between percentages of adults and youth. As long as this equilibrium exists, a nation can guarantee its future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1773.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09482758621 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98768777488 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580459770115 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4726992317 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.65 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109024480426 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0324213632334 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410240406003 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0656189596722 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370179174299 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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