Nowadays, It is a growing tendency that the vast majority of the young working-age population live in the developing world more than the elderly. This trend has a number of disadvantages but its advantages are much more considerable.
Above all, It is clear that the youth bulge brings a number of disadvantages. First of all, one of the main drawbacks of over young population is putting the pressure on educational systems and child-rearing services. The increase of junior citizens makes many primary schools in urban areas become overload. As a result, the quality of education is decreasing day by day. Moreover, another drawback of youth bulges is that a range of young adults are unemployed or working in low-paid because of the competitive workplaces. This makes many people can not escape from poverty in some developing regions.
On the other hand, It seems that the advantages of the youth bulge outweigh its demerits. Firstly, one of the main benefits of a large young population is boosting up economic development. Youth bulge creates high percentages of the productive workforce for the labor market so that it can make a great amount of taxes for governments. Secondly, another merit of increasing young people is reducing burdens on healthcare services. When governments invest less money on healthcare services to treat numerous illnesses for the older, they can save the community budgets for social welfares.
In conclusion, the strength of the youth bulge outweighs its weakness. Although it causes large immigration and unemployment, the young population can enhance the social economy.
- The world is experiencing a dramatic increase in population This is causing problems not only for poor undeveloped countries but also for industrialised and developing nations Describe some of the problems that overpopulation causes and suggest at least o 78
- In spite of the advances made in agriculture many people around the world still go hungry Why is this the case What can be done about this problem 89
- At the present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of older people Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ation can enhance the social economy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, moreover, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31906614786 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97594915494 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587548638132 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.3272334488 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1333333333 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196258198117 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637890261584 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512760239412 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119317241167 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260885156807 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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