At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large of young adults, compared with the number of older people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
every population has younger and elders. Nowadays, in some countries the statistic of elders is less than adolescence. In my opinion, any society, by growth of young population will be benefited through financial and economic advantages.
On the one hand, a good advantage of huge youngster’s population is that the workforce is young too. As new employee become younger, obviously, the work efficiency will increase and every society will face with a evolution in progressing and upgrading. such as many developed countries. Another benefits is that, young people have a stronger body than old people. Therefore, the cost of illnesses subsidizing could be invest in other government issues. such as, to build sports complexes or high-quality roads. In terms of happiness, younger people have more potential and energy to be happy. so the part of the country that is built for recreational time will expand and as the bars, discos and Amusement park vast. The amount of tourist will increase too. In the other words, tourism will bring wealth and money for that country.
On the other hands, there are some backwards if the majority of people be young. one the disadvantages is the more young people, the more fertility. so, the entire amount of population will rise too, so, the country may not have the potential to provide all the facilities and amenities for the increased population. Undoubtedly, some part of society will deprive from different thing such as education, house and also public transport.
In conclusion, also there might be say older people are a minority part of some countries, the majority of younger population will benefits society in various ways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20879120879 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84226897665 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567765567766 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9211027458 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1666666667 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145348515102 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462135658702 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396665546718 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100728869763 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206056927508 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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