At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compare with the number of older people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
The importance of populations’ age of a country, which has always been debatable, has now become more controversial. In recent years, the young population of a country is dramatically more than the middle-aged. In my firm conviction, the benefits of having young adults are significantly outweighing its drawbacks. There are myriad of reasons for my current opinion, which are going to be discussed in this essay.
On the one hand, the most rational justification about the benefits of having young people is that they are absolutely essential for the progress of a country. Firstly, nowadays, Business owners are looking for enthusiastic, active employees at a young age for their company. Secondly, the youth population is playing a vital role in raising the number of population in a country. Furthermore, young adults ought to pay their income taxes which is crucially important for governments’ financial growth.
On the other hand, although the young population is incredibly beneficial for governments, drawbacks cannot be negligible. As a matter of fact, if a country has a younger population, more facilities are required. For instance, governments expected to pay more attention to youth requirements such as the education system, make more schools or universities, health insurance or industries’ improvement for their jobs.
In addition, some hold the belief that, despite young adults, the old generation seems to be some sort of cost for the government on account of their special right like retirement revenue.
In a nutshell, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides of generation in a country, my personal sentiment is that although young have their special problem for governments but, undoubtedly, advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 109, Rule ID: ABSOLUTELY_ESSENTIAL[1]
Message: Use simply 'essential'.
Suggestion: essential
...of having young people is that they are absolutely essential for the progress of a country. Firstly,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for instance, in addition, sort of, such as, as a matter of fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48727272727 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24864676213 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578181818182 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0981601168 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.076923077 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4615384615 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156881847431 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609880521916 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352241765897 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0851964583007 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355981213136 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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