at the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large population of young adults, compared with the number of older people.
does the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of this situation?
The Population dynamics in current times, show an unbalanced ratio of yound and old people. In recent times, some countries population has higher proportion of young adults in comparison with elderly people. Benefits of this particular situation definitely outweights the possible drawbacks. This essay aims to address the advantages of this situations using examples and intrepretations.
First of all, in the past few centuries, many countries have been benefited from having a higher concentration of youngsters. This phenomenon of unbalanced population dynamics happens in all countries every few centuries. One evidence of this is seen in the massive growth of China, even this country faced similar situation and had a well-versed plan to enhance its youth’s ability. In the early 20th century, China’s population was hugely dominated by people under 30 years of age, they made more than one-third of its total population. The then developing nation understood the potential of its youth and made absolute use of it. Resulted in rapid growth and development in all sectors of the government.
Furthermore, If countries having this kind of demographic pattern in near future, develops a clear foresight and devise plans focusing on empowering its youth, it can defenitely become a nation of wonders. A recent demographic data shows, India is one among the countries which will follow this demographic shift and by 2030 India will have the most number of youngsters in the world. Thus, with massive work force any country can excel in the field of science and technology, health care, business, education. Possible disadvantages might be that countries will lack experienced emplyoees in many fields and a socially interwined nation can face huge impact in its familial structure.
To summarise, having more young people in a country can always bring more prosperity and excellence. While a less elderely population country will lack people who are experienced and can provide valuable guidance. Still the plethora of advantages outweighs the minimal disadvantages of this situation.
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first, furthermore, if, so, still, then, third, thus, well, while, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1776.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46461538462 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97970095001 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593846153846 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1591096209 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.470588235 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1176470588 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17647058824 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257702161355 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849120306731 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616129718823 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170383931443 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688177304759 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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