At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
Future of any country depends upon the youth population.Many developing countries has this current situation of more younger population than elder population.I believe it is more positive than any negative.Obviously the contrary of the situation with more elders would be more of a burden than any benefit.
Primarily focusing on the benefits of a country,youngsters are a direct reflection of the working class of the country,hence with high number of young adults the country has more work force and with most of its population working for its country, it definitely increases the economy.Not only in the terms of economical growth even to construct a stable social structure. Young people provide care to the rest of the population which includes non working class people such as children and older people.
To begin with a example,a country which enjoyed the luxury of having most youngsters in the past century.It is China, currently it is considered to be the most powerful and influential country in the world. The china’s status of being irreplaceable is only because of its young adults who worked tirelessly in the past.There are few disadvantages of this situation,which cannot be neglected.With lot of energy and power in hands of young people there rises the possibility of being misguided.There are multiple examples of social unrest, riots and many more cultural and religious clash between young adults.
In conclusion,having more young adults in a population has tons of benefits with few disadvantages .With proper guidance and opportunity it is possible to harness the best out of young adults.An atom can be constructive by using it in a power plant to generate electricity and it becomes destructive if made into an atom bomb.Hence,utilization of a such a great resource rely on the foresight of the country and its leaders.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25252525253 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39817556697 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535353535354 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 20.2975951904 241% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.773514194 49.4020404114 216% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 260.0 106.682146367 244% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.5 20.7667163134 238% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226915429799 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115190823949 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325221117956 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131188331685 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034217181355 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.0 13.0946893788 214% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 13.28 50.2224549098 26% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.6 11.3001002004 209% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.06 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.27 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.6 10.1190380762 213% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Many
...untry depends upon the youth population.Many developing countries has this current s...
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Message: Use only 'younger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
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...countries has this current situation of more younger population than elder population.I beli...
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Suggestion: I
...ounger population than elder population.I believe it is more positive than any ne...
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...e it is more positive than any negative.Obviously the contrary of the situation with more...
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...ly focusing on the benefits of a country,youngsters are a direct reflection of the working ...
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...tion of the working class of the country,hence with high number of young adults the co...
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Suggestion: Not
...ry, it definitely increases the economy.Not only in the terms of economical growth ...
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Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
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...es the economy.Not only in the terms of economical growth even to construct a stable socia...
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Suggestion: an
...dren and older people. To begin with a example,a country which enjoyed the lux...
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...ing most youngsters in the past century.It is China, currently it is considered to...
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...his situation,which cannot be neglected.With lot of energy and power in hands of you...
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...h between young adults. In conclusion,having more young adults in a population has t...
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...ons of benefits with few disadvantages .With proper guidance and opportunity it is p...
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...to harness the best out of young adults.An atom can be constructive by using it in...
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Suggestion: Hence
...s destructive if made into an atom bomb.Hence,utilization of a such a great resource ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , utilization
...tructive if made into an atom bomb.Hence,utilization of a such a great resource rely on the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, as to, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25252525253 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39817556697 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535353535354 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 20.2975951904 241% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.773514194 49.4020404114 216% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 260.0 106.682146367 244% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.5 20.7667163134 238% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226915429799 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115190823949 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325221117956 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131188331685 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034217181355 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.0 13.0946893788 214% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 13.28 50.2224549098 26% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.6 11.3001002004 209% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.06 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.27 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.6 10.1190380762 213% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.