In the contemporary world, a large number of population in some countries is young adults, which compares to older person. I believe that there has been some benefits in some ways, but also some drawbacks to our society which are explained below.
On the one hand, there are two primary advantages which supports the positive impacts of higher young population in some countries. Firstly, A huge future workforce who are more stronger and more intelligence than older workforce will boost the strength of a country in all kind of fields. It is true that the younger people can have more energy and more spirit to access any challenges which may be out of their ability. For example, a employee aged from 20 to 30 can easily much more into jobs which requires strength such as delivery. Secondly, It is widely known that the younger the more products they use, which lead to the increase of CPI rates ( a consumed rates in a country) . In other word, teenagers likely to consume completely food, clothing, transportations more the an older person who are much into the family life. As a results, Society have to manufacture more to meet national needs and this will help to promote the gross domestic products of countries.
On the other hand, Social problems and the shortage of working experience are the main disadvantages which communities worry about. As can be clearly seen that 'teenager' term always goes with the the develop of social problems such as frauds because of the lack of awareness and not maturity enough. The government should take this responsibility to make sure the right cognitive development of teenagers when they were a child. Moreover, It is the fact that most of young adult do not have experience enough to overcome all of situations in working because they not have time to try it.
In conclusion, the growth of young communities in some countries will up to some positive impacts to the development of a number of field. However, the government and organization should so some actions to prevent the bad things which this situations cause to society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 28, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
In the contemporary world, a large number of population in some countries is young a...
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Line 2, column 174, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'stronger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: stronger
...irstly, A huge future workforce who are more stronger and more intelligence than older workfo...
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Line 2, column 436, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...y be out of their ability. For example, a employee aged from 20 to 30 can easily ...
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Line 2, column 652, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... which lead to the increase of CPI rates a consumed rates in a country . In other...
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Line 2, column 683, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...CPI rates a consumed rates in a country . In other word, teenagers likely to cons...
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Line 2, column 777, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'an' is left.
Suggestion: the; an
...ly food, clothing, transportations more the an older person who are much into the fami...
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Line 2, column 835, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a result' or simply 'results'?
Suggestion: a result; results
...n who are much into the family life. As a results, Society have to manufacture more to me...
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Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...een that teenager term always goes with the the develop of social problems such as frau...
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Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...een that teenager term always goes with the the develop of social problems such as frau...
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Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...that teenager term always goes with the the develop of social problems such as frauds becau...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1726.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87570621469 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69296363957 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536723163842 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 14.1411927833 49.4020404114 29% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 115.066666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231153540004 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771506583251 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864111942731 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15385546559 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710272297582 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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