The population from different countries frequently change over time, while some have an older population, others have higher numbers of younger citizens. There are some some drawbacks of having more young folks but at the same time some advantages. In my opinion the latter have more impact on the society than the first.
Although older and more experienced people can be positive, the majority being young adults can have many good outcomes. Firstly, for employment reasons, the young are more fit to work and also more qualifications. Some jobs require more physical related attributes and are also more demanding, requiring a specific age group for a particular task. Moreover, this newer generations are better qualified for some professions because the majority of them attended college. Other fields besides the work industry have advantages of a young population.
Most noticeably of all, in my opinion will be the general health of the country natives. Since the majority of diseases tend to appear in older ages, specially chronic pathologies, in these countries will find them less often. The possible reasons, can be connected with better and healthier lifestyles, because generally adults are more physically active but also due to healthier diets, that are increasing in younger generations due to easily accessible information, as the internet.
To sum up, in spite of having some possibly drawbacks in having the majority of the population excessively young, there are crucial factors that favour it and that can result in a positive outcome for these countries. Nevertheless it is important that some investment is made for this age group like a strong education that make up for possible lack of experience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, while, in my opinion, in spite of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30909090909 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80364815467 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570909090909 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4016125141 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.307692308 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172074516136 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636881597454 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532487531906 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104614625661 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561573622438 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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