In the bar chart presented for analysis, we can observe the percentage of both male and female Australian citizens that perform regular physical exercise, in the specific year of 2010, and according to different age groups.
First of all, it is clear that are gender differences, where is possible to observe that women are the ones that do most of the exercise. While men are less active than women overall, that is not verified in younger ages, where they are on the top position. Later in life, those differences are less pronounced.
Until 25 years old, more than 50% of the boys do regular physical activity but from this age forward till 44 years years old, it will start to decrease, reaching its lowest percentage of 39.5. In the other hand, girls with less than 25 do less exercise than boys but as they getting older, are getting more active and by the time they are between ages of 45 to 54, 53.3 % of them choose a more active lifestyle.
From 54 years old forward, the pattern begin to change and if female start to decrease their routine daily activities, men on the opposite begin to gradually increase it. By the time that both genders reach more than 65 years old they have similar physical habits, where 46.7% of male and 47.1% of females choose to regularly do it.
- Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 73
- Some people think placing advertisements in schools is a great resource for public schools that need additionally funding, but others think it exploits children by treating them as a captive audience for corporate sponsors.Choose which position you most a 77
- In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transportDisucss both the 35
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 84
- The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 110, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: years
...ivity but from this age forward till 44 years years old, it will start to decrease, reachin...
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Line 7, column 27, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ifestyle. From 54 years old forward, the pattern begin to change and if femal...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 20.0 5.60731707317 357% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1063.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 229.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64192139738 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32228051008 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 106.607317073 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576419213974 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.09781644 43.030603864 244% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 151.857142857 112.824112599 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.7142857143 22.9334400587 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210021185478 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960573493761 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08260115018 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139409722508 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0864648251475 0.0819641961636 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.2329268293 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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