Present a written argument or case to an educated non-specialist audience on the following topic:
Under British and Australian laws a jury in a criminal case has no access to information about the defendant's past criminal record. This protects the person who is being accused of the crime.
Some lawyers have suggested that this practice should be changed and that a jury should be given all the past facts before they reach their decision about the case.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The jury board in Britain and Australia have no prior knowledge on the accused past criminal record, if any exsists, to give a fair ruling. However, some lawyers proposed to change this method to make a proper decision on a case.
The jurors and the accused have to way of contact before the trials begin, they only know of the information they are given. In this way, the person charged with a crime can make a good first impression on them. However if a person in falsely put on a trial, they might be on a mental strain which would give them a dissevel look that would put off the jurors. Here, knowing about the summoned can make the job easier.
Furthermore, the poll members should be aware of not only the criminal past of the person on trial but also about his educational history, metal stability and medical records as these factors play a key role in making a criminal out of a innocent person. They also need to know about through history of the victim and the supposed criminal to determine if the crime was premediated or spontaenious.
In the korean movie, Miracle at cell no 7, had the scenerio perfectly depicted for us. The innocent and mentally retarded man was falsely thrown in jail and later punished for raping and murdering a child. Neither the jury members nor the police looked at the man before them; they only saw the circumstantial evidence which could have been overruled upon closer inspection. The inability of the man to express himself only help to further indict himself as a criminal.
However the jurors should not be biased upon knowing the facts of the accused. The facts only should help to understand the person and their motive for the crime. Only then a fair and wise decision could be made.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64077669903 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40686641473 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546925566343 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0448687568 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86666666667 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152521334212 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458539534059 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528444179098 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893238774736 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742350585639 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.