Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic:
News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers.
What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?
You should write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, TV and newspapers are popular for all people in the world to updated information which is around their daily life. Some channel are formal which are usually belonging to government but some are not. Therefore, there are many bad news and good news suffusing into miscellaneous condition due to the purpose of the editors from distinct media companies. People is questioning what factors would influence the editors’s decisions to choose the news and how people are tolerant the bad news toward the good news.
Profit is considered as an essential factor to make a company survive in a competitive economy, and as a result, editors have to give something to attract the reader as more as they can for increment. Thus, the editors always follow the taste of the customer regardless of everything while formal channel censored by government release mostly the truth among them. It is said that, human are always appealed to the black point in a blank paper. That mean no matter how terrific is the good, they might be intensely obsession. Unfortunately, the editors know that and make them serve as a tool to gain income leading to exceeding unexpected news.
although, bad news is overwhelming, beside that there is also a good point to make citizen warning theirselves in preparation and avoidance during danger conditions. On the other hand, pessimistic thought is a serious problem for whom are fanatic bringing faith loss in their country where they are living. As a consequences, reactionist can totally take advantage from it to attack the connection between authority and civilian creating a political chaos . Accordingly, the limitation of useless tidings and delivering valuable information can be concerned as a perfect method.
In conclusion, revisers depend on their aims to public mental product including the good or the bad. As a judicious audience, filtering is necessary skill to keep clear head and do not forget about the white area in the paper excluding the black dot.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r for all people in the world to updated information which is around their daily ...
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Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...s around their daily life. Some channel are formal which are usually belonging to g...
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Line 1, column 157, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ily life. Some channel are formal which are usually belonging to government but some are not. Therefo...
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Line 1, column 232, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[4]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much bad news', 'a good deal of bad news'.
Suggestion: much bad news; a good deal of bad news
... but some are not. Therefore, there are many bad news and good news suffusing into miscellane...
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Line 3, column 175, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...something to attract the reader as more as they can for increment. Thus, the edito...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Although
...leading to exceeding unexpected news. although, bad news is overwhelming, beside that ...
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Line 5, column 311, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a consequence' or simply 'consequences'?
Suggestion: a consequence; consequences
...their country where they are living. As a consequences, reactionist can totally take advantage...
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Line 5, column 450, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hority and civilian creating a political chaos . Accordingly, the limitation of u...
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Line 5, column 457, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...and civilian creating a political chaos . Accordingly, the limitation of useless ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1684.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13414634146 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84980951145 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615853658537 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5694791527 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.266666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8666666667 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0969681991103 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0258548265532 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337414091268 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0490235968912 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297597155537 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.