"Prevention is better than cure"
Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on have education and preventative measures.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Country's huge percentage of expenses from health budget which are spent on cure should be spent on prevention and health education instead. In my opinion, I disagree with this statement that cure is needed everywhere.
Treatment is only hope for people who diagnosed with incurable diseases such as cancer, diabetes mellitus, pestilence and so on. These kind of people can extend their life a bit by taking regular medicines while preventative measures cannot be the best way in this case. If country stop spending money on cure, large proportion of population will face to death.
Furthermore, not everyone follow doctor's advice, they keep supporting their personal choice that may influence to their health after certain amount of time. Nobody can change people who always ignore and do not rely to medical facts as well as opinions of advanced doctors. Moreover, prevention is not considered the key of health for them. As a result, people who ignore everything get sick one day and start require for cure to get better. In addition, from my perspective, country should import even wider range of treatments from foreign countries to achieve high share of healthy population. Thus, this could benefit to countries budget because people begin spent money on treatment within their country instead of in other expensive countries in which have more choices of cure.
All in all, requests for medicine never stops where there are people with genetic incurable diseases. Therefore, disobedient people exist everywhere who realize that health is extremely important at the end.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 130, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'These kinds'?
Suggestion: This kind; These kinds
...iabetes mellitus, pestilence and so on. These kind of people can extend their life a bit b...
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Line 3, column 659, Rule ID: BEING_BEGIN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'being'?
Suggestion: being
...efit to countries budget because people begin spent money on treatment within their ...
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Line 3, column 689, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...se people begin spent money on treatment within their country instead of in other...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in addition, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24110671937 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5960166189 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.667984189723 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5225791611 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3846153846 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316253175966 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103327025017 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783488767897 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192553137027 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113014384727 0.056905535591 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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