Price Is The Most Important Thing To Consider When Buying Something
Some people believe that it is essential to consider the price before buying something. While I agree with the argument that people should think carefully before spending a large amount of money in order to avoid debt, in my opinion, the necessity of the purchase must play a role in the decision to buy.
It is essential that people should spend some time to analyse how much money they can spend to buy a particular item, and whether or not they can afford to buy it within the available budget. Over the last few decades, with the easy access to credit cards and bank loans, people are tempted to purchase luxurious and expensive items, which are actually not necessary, and later land themselves in trouble. For this reason, any item that is costly and is bought using credit ought to be given a serious thought. A good example of this would be the increase in the purchase of iPhones even among lower-middle-class people, owing to the flexible and interest-free EMI options.
On the other hand, there are circumstances where the cost of an item or service becomes an irrelevant consideration. When someone’s life depends on a product or service such as medical treatment for a terminal disease, purchase of this service becomes crucial irrespective of the price. For example, bone marrow transfusion required for the treatment of a haemophilia patient costs around 50-60 lakhs, which is well beyond the budget of a middle-class family. However, to save the life of their loved one, they have to pay this amount. Having said that, these situations are very rare and in most circumstances, the price factor needs to be considered to control excess spending and avoid debt issues in the future.
In conclusion, people should plan thoroughly before spending large sums of money on goods and services, unless it is very important.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...can spend to buy a particular item, and whether or not they can afford to buy it within the av...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, however, if, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95161290323 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76186495378 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590322580645 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.8296210618 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.916666667 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120564900659 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449793381081 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066963552287 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0663384725177 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509065514695 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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