In the modern era, crimes surge at an alarming pace. Most of the countries regards prison as a common method to control this problem; however, providing better education is more effectual method to cope with this menace. I agree with the former argument and will discuss my views in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, prison is a fruitful method for reducing crimes, which is in use from several decades. The offender is sent to jail to set an example for others. Hence, the detention will be deterrent for those who intends to commit any crime. People feel reluctance if they came to know about the punishment before committing a crime.Thus, jails became an illustration for others. Moreover, prison is the best method for maintaining safety of general public. If criminals are set free of jail, there will be chaos everywhere. That is why, offenders are isolated from society.
Besides this, providing better education will also be a complimentary way to cope with this growing concern. If children are taught about rules in schools and colleges, they do not even think about committing any offence. In addition to this, education should be given to criminals in prison so that skill could be developed in them which will be helpful for finding job after their bail from jail.
To sum up, although educative measures can decrease the rate of offences, and will help criminals for developing skills, but this way could only be used as additionally because prison is far more important for safety of general public.Therefore, I agree that jails are more required to reduce crimes,and education should be given as a complimentory method.
- Weddings are more expensive in many countries comparison present and past What is the reason behind this Is this a positive or a negative development 84
- Prison is the common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime However a more effective solution is to provide people with a better education Agree or disagree 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, in addition, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02919708029 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73257024929 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587591240876 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.1831905143 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4285714286 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212535023564 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689895997379 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812939655191 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149513822292 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0897875376609 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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