Weddings and ceremonies have been a status symbol for society since decades. Nowadays, these functions are becoming much more expensive in some countries than they are in past. this essay intends to discuss what are the reasons behind expensive weddings, and whether this is a positive development or not.
On the one hand, weddings are more expensive because people are more rich than they are in past. At present, majority of wealth is concentrated in a small number of hands; hence, they spend a lot of money on weddings and other ceremonies. This is because, weddings are regarded as a status of wealth and prosperity in many countries. To keep their social status high, people spend their money on these functions. Besides this, media also plays a crucial role in making weddings expensive. Media publicise video clips and pictures of weddings of famous personalities. When people see these clips, they also set their marriage goals such as Pre wedding shoot, reception party and so on. Due to the addition of these ceremonies, weddings became more costlier.
On the other hand, these types of weddings are detrimental for society and public. Under the pressure of society, people take loan for spending money on the wedding of their son or daughter. This is because, a person's standard of living is judged by the money spent on marriage. Expensive wedding is regarded as the prosperity of family. Therefore, people take debt for costly weddings. Take a survey report of taking debt for weddings in India as an example, which listed that the number of taking loans for marriage surged, from 20 % in 2010, to 70% in 2019.
In conclusion, the weddings are becoming costlier because people who are rich show off their wealth to society, and the second reason behind this is the influence of media.however, this is a negative development because people take loan debt just to show off their fake wealth in front of the society.
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- Weddings are more expensive in many countries comparison present and past What is the reason behind this Is this a positive or a negative development 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, hence, however, second, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57955580889 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498461538462 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7283977967 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5555555556 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0555555556 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27777777778 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329305083988 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102685516772 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0996511430729 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219124212208 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116889500011 0.056905535591 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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