It is argued by some people that prison is the only truly viable way to deter crime. As far as I am concerned, I disagree with this statement.
There are a plethora of reasons why imprisonment might not be the most ideal punishment in various cases. Firstly, minor criminals can be punished through fines or community services, which is more economical than prison, and can help to minimize the damage caused to the criminal’sg family. Had it not been for this, there would not have been any more viable punishments for individuals whose crimes are insignificant. Secondly, by keeping these light criminals engaged in society, authorities can make an effort to rehabilitate them through training or educational programs. This will help to reduce relapsing into crime in the future. For instance, a number of prisoners in Vietnam are required to partake in social service activities to help them regain morality and reflect on themselves.
Besides, in this day and age of technology and modernization, if offenders are believed to be a threat to society, there are possible ways to control them such as electronic tagging or being supervised by police. Such methods can be be effective in reducing criminal behaviors and are quite a strong punishment as they restrict an offender’s freedom greatly. Furthermore, prisoners might potentially form groups during their jail period, which could potentially create detrimental consequences such as a plan to escape from prison, or form connection to practice in crime again after having served their sentence. Only extremely dangerous criminals, such as someone who cause deaths of others, should be kept isolated from society for their sins.
In conclusion, it seems to me that imprisonment is a last resort in cases which there is no alternative available, and it is not the most effective method in all circumstances.
- Nowadays more and more foreign students are going to English Speaking countries to learn the international language English It is undoubtedly true that studying English in an English speaking country is the best way but it is not the only way to learn it 73
- As major cities in the world are growing today so do their problems What are problems for young people who are living in the cities as the result of continued growth What are solutions for these problems 87
- Prison is the only truly effective form of punishment because it separates criminals from society 84
- Nowadays more and more foreign students are going to English Speaking countries to learn the international language English It is undoubtedly true that studying English in an English speaking country is the best way but it is not the only way to learn it 79
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hich is more economical than prison, and can help to minimize the damage caused t...
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Suggestion: be
... supervised by police. Such methods can be be effective in reducing criminal behavior...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21523178808 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99762526071 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622516556291 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5457058987 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.153846154 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231166049115 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672533348053 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568903752065 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116494643451 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051622202705 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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