Problem solution
Some people buy unnecessary things that costs them a bomb . This problem will be explored in the given essay, and measures should be suggested to tackle the given issue.
To begin with, it’s to be mentioned that it’s a huge problem for a person who wastes money on plethora of things that are not vital or even necessary. To be honest, it’s also disturbing for sorrounding people, as they always lend money which is either pressurising for them or for the borrower ,consequently, the debts are inseparable part of their life.
Moreover, they become nervous and anxious if can not afford to buy the desired good.
Certainly, the solution is beyond the psychological level. There are myriad of suggested ways to prevent this bad habit of shopoholics. For example, one of the solutions is to engage the given person in different fascinating activities like dancing classes or jumping from the parachute. The person will indeed get his portion of adrenaline and will lose the strong desire to waste money and time on inessentials stuff.
To summerise, although this is the grave problem of all times and people, I reiterate that by attracting people with different innovative activities , who are inclined to spend money unpurposefully is really a good choice. It’s predicted that after being busy with interesting activities they will recover from bad habits.
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- Integrated 3
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- News media is importand in our society. Why is it so important? Is its influence positive or negative? 78
- MANY PEOPLE NOW LIVE IN SOCIETIES WHERE CONSUMER GOODS HAVE BECOME CHEAP.WHAT ARE THE ADVANTAGES THE DISADVENTAGES? 73
- The threat of nuclear weapons maintains the world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far out-weight the disadvantages. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ressurising for them or for the borrower ,consequently, the debts are inseparable ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, moreover, really, so, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1155.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15625 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84536670338 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611607142857 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0232579237 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3636363636 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145580675181 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525450195836 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635051971464 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0631337292557 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386319465803 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.