Professional sports are a very large industry in the world today. The most elite players can get contracts worth many millions of dollars. Some say there is too much money in sports and that it defeats the purpose of the actual game.
Do you agree or disagree with the statement?
Nowadays, sports play a very important role not only as a healthcare matter but also entertaining people. It is said that one of the world largest industries today include professional sports. Top ranked athletes get contracts with an insanely huge amount of money. Because of this, people believe that unnecessary money is used which destroys the original purpose of sports and I strongly agree with this argument.
Money involving in sports is as ridiculous as eating ice-cream with ketchup. First and foremost, money causing cheating in sports is an undoubtedly problem. A situation where a professional soccer player signs a contract to actually ruin the match for money could be cited as an example. These shameful things are usually occurred with a vast amount of money .Therefore, cheating is unavoidable when money involve.
In addition, money take away the original definition of sports, which is entertaining and insuring healthcare. Since ages, this activity has always been a great way to improve life and health. Before the concept of industrializing sports had not yet been defined, people take sports seriously as a great way to train their body both physically and mentally. But it is not the case nowadays, when traditional values of the activity are being ruined by some colorful papers in our pockets. As the results, the purpose of sports has not been retained anymore.
In conclusion, I strongly agree with the idea that an abundant amount of money used in sport will actually kill the main purpose of the game itself.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14624505929 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75162411439 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592885375494 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2185351798 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0714285714 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261548395198 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879042574062 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461050528068 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162450086197 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373116430244 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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