Professional sports are a very large industry in the world today. The most elite players can get contracts worth many millions of dollars. Some say the is too much money in sports and that it defeats the purpose of the actual game.
Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Elite participants of professional sport these days are seen receiving contracts with millions of dollars, which they are deemed to be overpaid, fading the real purpose of the game. In my opinion, although these professional players receive an excess salary, I still believe that there are reasons for this phenomenon.
On the one hand, it is true that an excessive amount of money is paid to sports players, which is still not a vital service for the society. For example, professional footballers in international competitions make enormous salaries for just by kicking a ball. Without such big sports competitions, people can still live happily as it only plays the role of a form of entertainment. In contrast, professionals like nurses, doctors, teachers are examples of people who made such dedication to society that should be valued more.
On the flip side of the coin, it is still fair for sports professionals to receive large sums of money for their plays. Firstly, there is a wide number of sports players in every nation, but only a minority become elite players. Secondly, sport is a prominent entertainment industry, a large audience of sports fans are willing to buy tickets to watch celebrities playing. Besides that, television games or sports events with these famous figures with high entertaining rates also attract millions of viewers. Thus, it is reasonable to reward these top sports persons for their hard work, trials, and practice.
In conclusion, although skillful sports persons receive large amounts of money for their salary, for the fun and money that they bring to people and the economy, they are worthy of their rewards.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 74, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'sport'.
Suggestion: sport
...an excessive amount of money is paid to sports players, which is still not a vital ser...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, still, thus, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13284132841 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80373364874 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590405904059 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.6868413268 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 115.916666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4166666667 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217431199021 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853822693469 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497787185078 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136818824074 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498639738737 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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