Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals, others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People hold different views about the concerns of the environment. Although it is true that the decline of certain species of both the flora and fauna is a critical issue, I would argue that it shall not be the core focus and other important issues to deal with.
It can be argued that the decline in some species of animals and plants is a critical issue, due to the fact that animals and plants are the lifeblood of humanity. Uncommon animal species with certain values in entertainment, education, medicines, or act as important sources of food, are found to be rare and facing the possibility of extinction. This trend can be credited to human behaviors, take the Cao Bang musk deers, for example, a medical source for treating some diseases, are now endangered due to deforestation and illegal hunting. Losing such valuable species that play an integral part in maintaining the ecological balance and biodiversity is a disadvantage for humanity.
On the other hand, there isn’t only one important environmental concern for humanity to deal with. Climate change is another issue that scientists and environmentalists care about, where the emission of greenhouse gases from industrial factories trap the heat from going to the outer space, leading to a phenomenon known as the greenhouse effect. The increased temperature would lead to the melting the polar ice caps, resulting in rising sea levels and even tsunami. Besides, excess usage of aerosol spray cans and refrigerants is the primary reason for the depletion of the ozone layer, solar radiations would then pose a serious threat to the health of humans.
In conclusion, despite justifications for the seriousness of the disappearance of certain species, it is obviously not the most significant problem, there are other problems equal to it in terms of urgency.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, then, for example, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14715719064 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94689636115 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598662207358 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.1198563446 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.909090909 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1818181818 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134290628676 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550192452708 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512644686733 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0860474098245 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444563643193 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.