Psychological illnesses may not be as obvious as physical disabilities or illnesses, nevertheless they are just as disabling in their own way. Society, however, is more accepting of those with physical than psychological illnesses or disabilities.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The quantity of diseases connected with the humans’ bad mind condition has been increasing during the last years. The medical workers and the greatest part of people disregard such diseases, considering that they are not so dangerous and problematic as physical diseases. Although I agree, that often physical problems may led to more limit abilities of individuals, the psychological problems should be discussed by medical society too, due to its importance.
On the one hand due to the similarity of stress symptoms to physical deviations, they are considered as no dangerous diseases, which do not lead to heavy consequences. Almost all mental problems can develop during a long period of time and do not have any serious symptoms. That is why the doctors often give to patient some pills and do not assign an examination, hoping that the tablets will help. For example, according to statistics of the neurological clinic nearly 70% of hospital visitors told that after definite course of sedative treatment their pains passed. Thus in some cases physical problems are considered such slight and safe diseases, because they can disappear independently or with help of pills.
On the other hand the humans with the invalid mind may provoke several social problems and peril in society. During the last 10 years the quantity of crimes, related to physical unhealthy people, such as maniacs or unbalanced individuals, increased considerably. Moreover even small derivations in physical health may cause a number of neurodegenerative diseases. If a person notices a loose of memory, an aggressive behavior and irritability, it is the first call for attendance a doctor. For instance, one of the latest articles in the respectable journal called Nature Science provided information that the Alzheimer disease resulted from bad function of neuron cells and at the initial stage the symptoms are similar to the simple distraction and anxiety. Thus physical derivations are the bells, which urge a person to visiting doctor or watch for dynamic of their well-being more carefully.
To sum up I think that physical problems are important due to their danger and sometimes stealth. Every person should keep track of health and asks for medical help, because only careful attitude to well-being will allow to prevent negative consequences, such various diseases and social conflicts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, i think, such as, in some cases, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2014.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34217506631 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91829028431 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 630.9 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.525450529 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.875 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5625 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152999922687 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508823418938 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427957442934 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951646581141 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321988276303 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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