In education and employment, some people work harder than others.
Why do some people work harder? Is it always a good thing to work hard?
In the modern society, people work very hard to achieve certain successes in work and study. It goes without saying that individuals aspire after competition and do their best to perform better compared with others in all areas of human life. Usually it is a good skill to do their job better, because people who work harder than their colleagues achieve better results.
I strongly believe that the main reason for aspiration after hard work is considered to be money. In general, salary is what makes people work. Hard working employees achieve better results for their companies and this is the sense why employers pay them more money. For example, top manager of Gazprom Company Miller received a bonus of several million dollars last year because he worked very hard. Thus, the amount of money a person earns depends on how they works.
Another strong reason that motivating personals work more than their colleagues is rivalry. Many workers want to be better than other staff, it brings them satisfaction. For example, on my last job, photographs of the best co-workers of the year hung on the wall and everyone wanted to be one of them. Thus, competition on a working place looks like sport competition, only hard working person can achieve a goal and win the gold medal.
In my opinion, it is always good when people work hard. Usually, for company this is achieved goals, for employees this is a promotion and the best salary, for clients this is high quality products. For example, at all my previous jobs I worked hard and was promoted many times. Thus, people love competitions especially which take place at their work.
Taking everything into consideration, I can say that there are people who work harder than other and this is positive process for everyone around them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 463, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'work'
Suggestion: work
...oney a person earns depends on how they works. Another strong reason that motivatin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, thus, for example, in general, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91118421053 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45096474589 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549342105263 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3682400849 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8235294118 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8823529412 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41176470588 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338245327927 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135122852426 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104568620966 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210630314394 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438811247778 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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