public cash should be spent on promoting healthy life rather than treating illness.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I
... more than treating pay on the diseases.I am fully agree with this assertion.I wi...
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Suggestion: agreed
...treating pay on the diseases.I am fully agree with this assertion.I will discuss my p...
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...es.I am fully agree with this assertion.I will discuss my point of view in upcomi...
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Suggestion: , in
...n upcoming paragraph. To begin with,in these days adolescent have very curious...
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Line 7, column 98, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...about their health as far as they doing a lots of exercise such as running,walking, ...
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Suggestion: , walking
...doing a lots of exercise such as running,walking, jumping,out games and so much other ...
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...rcise such as running,walking, jumping,out games and so much other thing.I think t...
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...mping,out games and so much other thing.I think that youth can do exercise in the...
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Suggestion: For
... not facing the problem of any diseases.For instance, obesity, low pressure,heart,a...
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Suggestion: , heart
...ases.For instance, obesity, low pressure,heart,anxiety,high pressure and so on.Afte...
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Suggestion: , high
...nce, obesity, low pressure,heart,anxiety,high pressure and so on.After that,they s...
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Suggestion: So
...sure,heart,anxiety,high pressure and so on.After that,they should easily focus ...
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Suggestion: After
...eart,anxiety,high pressure and so on.After that,they should easily focus their on ...
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Suggestion: , they
...ty,high pressure and so on.After that,they should easily focus their on modules th...
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Line 15, column 15, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , first
...to the healthy life. Moving towards,first and foremost,government should invest p...
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Suggestion: , government
.... Moving towards,first and foremost,government should invest payment on the food becau...
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...d because youngster would eat the health diet in their daily routine so it shoul...
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Suggestion: Diet
...ause youngster would eat the health diet in their daily routine so it should be ...
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Suggestion: Moreover
... it should be benefits for their health.Moreover,todays there are several gym availa...
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Suggestion: , todays
...ld be benefits for their health.Moreover,todays there are several gym available for...
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...r their health.Moreover,todays there are several gym available for the fitness.w...
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...ir health.Moreover,todays there are several gym available for the fitness.when yout...
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...ness.when youth can avoid the junk food.For example,pizza,oil,spicy,burger and extr...
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Suggestion: , pizza
...outh can avoid the junk food.For example,pizza,oil,spicy,burger and extra.Lastly,who m...
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Suggestion: , spicy
...void the junk food.For example,pizza,oil,spicy,burger and extra.Lastly,who must need c...
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Suggestion: Lastly
...xample,pizza,oil,spicy,burger and extra.Lastly,who must need check the medical in e...
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...,pizza,oil,spicy,burger and extra.Lastly,who must need check the medical in every...
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Suggestion: Medical
...extra.Lastly,who must need check the medical in every year like as any illness will ...
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Suggestion: treat
...l be starting that doctor should easily treating as without any fear relate to they may ...
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Suggestion: now
...ut any fear relate to they may live nor no on the planet. All said and done,I...
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Suggestion: , I
...no on the planet. All said and done,I reckon health is backbone in part of li...
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...h is backbone in part of life than today primitive ave very aware about their hea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, lastly, may, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, i reckon, i think, such as, as well as, it is true, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2109375 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.51932964531 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64453125 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 64.0 20.2975951904 315% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 134.364011179 49.4020404114 272% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 333.5 106.682146367 313% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 64.0 20.7667163134 308% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 36.75 7.06120827912 520% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.38176352705 205% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201991642834 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127584946365 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039726618321 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0806599712818 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588640024209 0.056905535591 103% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.1 13.0946893788 268% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 14.98 50.2224549098 30% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 11.3001002004 240% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.83 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.51 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.6 10.1190380762 273% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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