By punishing murderer with the death penalty, society is also guilty of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison is better punishment for murderers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
The issue whether the murderers should punished with death penalty or not is a controversial. In the word, while many countries remain capital punishment, other nations supposed that is an apparent violence of human right. From my point of view, I believe that the death penalty for manslaughter is really necessary if it is a specially dangerous crime.
For a variety of reason to keep capital punishment. Firstly, existence of dangerous murderers such as cold-blooded serial killers, spree killers or terrorist threaten life-safety of other people in community. They are premedicated slaughters, who took innocent citizen’s life and caused irretrievable damages for many families.
Secondly, although prison is a solid place with many rounds of securities to detain criminals, there were some jailbreaks successfully and those jailbreakers after escaping from prison would become especially dangerous homicide. They even gathered accomplies to attack prison and one more time commited murder. Therefore, to make sure secure society and annihilate completely hazard. Additionally, even when they are in prision,this punishment is not strong and strict enough to threaten and educate other people to must not take action like them because in many developed countries, prisoners only lost freedom but their living condition in jail is acceptable for minimum private demands.
Thirdly, according to some criminologist in the world, there is a remarkable effect of death penalty on reduction of murder cases. For instant, in UK, in 20th century, when this country implemented capital punishment, the rate of homicide was very low. Since the date of repeal death penalty, this rate doubled and has been increasing continuously. Similarly, in Australia or in some states in US, the rate of implement capital punishment is inversely propotional with the rate of murder cases. Furthermore, some countries used to abolish this type of penalty for a short period but after that they recovered and have been applying up to now such as Philippine, Nepal.
The last but not least, when death penalty is vigorously condemned by human right group, we should evaluate fairly homicide as an immoral , unhuman action. Hence, when the slaughter took the human right of other people, they also took their human right by themselves.
In conclusion, people need to accept responsibility for their action. Punishing murderers with death penalty is strictest way that society can help people to realize the consequences of their action. Personaly, I think that remain capital punishment is important to prevent from homicide.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, really, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, while, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2213.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 404.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47772277228 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93074042611 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576732673267 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 692.1 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6639215021 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.65 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 17.0 3.9879759519 426% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294488366866 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899549064774 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0867726904322 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148443619917 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621979064117 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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