Nowadays, unfortunately, serious crimes like murder increased. Some people believe murder deserve to be killed by death penalty; however, others said that those supporter of death penalty do exactly what murder did and there is no disparity between them. So detaining in prison is better punishment for murders. I disagree with this statement and in this essay I explain my reasons.
It is argued that a number of people explain that punishment should reform the bad behavior. As death penalty is so strict fine for any kind of crime even murder, it does not change anything and it is better change behavior of criminal by cramping in prison. What is neglected about this statement is to pose a risk for other criminals by living near that murder because always there is a bit risk that changing behavior will not work out, so it is obvious that living in prison cannot be a good way to punishment.
Death penalty is the deterrent punishment, it means, whereas it seems strict punishment, it is a very good way to frighten people that see killing other people as just crime that I will not pay a heavy fine. Such as other crime, that how much they would be harsher, the punishment also will be heavier, the biggest crime that person would do is murdering and deserve the highest severe judgment. In addition, it is not fair enough for victim's family that see such as ridiculous verdict, because they lost something that will not replacement. So it is not highly unlikely that want to do something that murder did on his victim.
In conclusion, the judgment in countries are difference with each other but I believe to disorder judgmental, in other words I think judge should consider about pain that victim's family suffers and then consider punishment is fair or not.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 156, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this supporter' or 'those supporters'?
Suggestion: this supporter; those supporters
...eath penalty; however, others said that those supporter death penalty do exactly what murder di...
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Line 2, column 260, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: What
...vior of criminal by cramping in prison. what is neglected about this statement is to...
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Line 3, column 360, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'deserve the highest'.
Suggestion: deserve the highest
...e that person would do is murdering and deserve highest severe judgment. In addition, it is not...
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Line 4, column 172, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'victims'' or 'victim's'?
Suggestion: victims'; victim's
...k judge should consider about pain that victims family suffers and then consider punish...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, whereas, i think, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80263157895 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55187692317 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.778438066 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.666666667 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322516397491 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120007709625 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623781950134 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200875893903 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123857266173 0.056905535591 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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