By punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilt of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison is a better punishment for murderers. To what extent do u agree or disagree with this statement ? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
For centuries, there have been a debate to whether death penalty or life imprisonment is a finer way of disciplining murderers. Death penalty is inhuman and life in prison is a better way of punishing murderers because they deserve a chance to realize their mistakes.
In some countries it is legal to kill someone if they have committed a terrible crime. This is called a death sentence, or the death penalty. There are lots of reasons why people think it's wrong. For example, death penalty goes against our most basic human right - the right to life. Which clearly states that no one have the right to take another mans life no matter what, and doing so does not make the society any better than those murderers. Secondly, no-one has ever proven with numbers that killing murderers stops other people committing similar crimes. No matter how many thousands or millions are killed by death penalty more and more people who are inveterate murderer are still not fazed by this, so clearly it is not a solution. Lastly, mistakes are sometimes made in the law - what if someone is killed who is actually innocent? that person can never be exonerated as he/she died for an unjust cause.
Furthermore, prisons gives people time to mull about their actions and possibly change due to remorse. Any form of punishment in modern era is for retribution and to great extent corrections. Prison punishment is also known as school of corrections. In practical world, due to less resources, the correctional home like prisons have defeated their goal /formation for reasons you laid. Yet, the prisons make sense as freedom is very precious for every human being. There is effectiveness of the prison as for general deterrence but with regard to specific deterrence, it has its own limitations and I still claim they are effective to great extent. As men who have to been to prison do not want to be there again unless the obdurate murderers.
To conclude, death penalty is unethical and inhuman to the society and should be abolished. While life in prison sentences on the other hand can help rehabilitate this murderers and at the same time it is morally right and should be encouraged.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, still, while, as for, for example, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1811.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86827956989 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61052545415 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556451612903 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9260837999 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.55 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 3.9879759519 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348086510894 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930183990488 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459243601176 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191392246268 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473112127123 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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