Some of the Methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in todays society. To what extent do you agree with this view.
Advertisements have become increasingly popular these days. There have been numerous ways of advertisements in recent years, but the draw back is that not all of this methods of advertisements are acceptable and ethical in our society today. I can undoubtfully say that i completely agree with this viewpoint.
To begin with, there are a variety of ways in which advertisements are being carried out these days that are inappropriate. Advertisements on mobile phone is a typical example of an unacceptable method of advertisement in our society. For Instance, in my country, where this so called network providers can freely bombard people with unnecessary advertisement messages through SMS or sometimes even through phones calls is not acceptable. From a personal experience i had with MTN, they send at least five sms per day to their costumers advertising their goods and services. One particular incident i will never forget was when they called me around 2AM, at first i thought it was elder brother because he often call me that late. But low and behold i realized it was MTN after i answered the call they started advertising their new product, after countless outcry from the public about the invasion of their privacy by them. The government had to fine them 50000 naira and mandate that no advertisement or promotion should be done through mobile phones by an network provider, it can be clearly said that this kind of advertisement method is ethical.
Further method of advertisement that is unsocial for our society are some adverts through the internet or world wide web. Some adverts will just keep popping up in your browser and redirecting you to another site just to simply download their products, this can be really infuriating and irritating. For example, this site Tvshow4mobile.com is filled with such advertisements which forces people to buy and download their products by the constant redirection to their sale page. This kind of way of advertising is unacceptable to the society.
To conclude, looking at this discussion it is crystal clear that some ways of advertisement is inappropriate and immoral to our society as they invade our privacy and force us to buy or download there goods and services. Eloquently speaking this needs to stop as government and individuals needs to stop this
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 24.0651302605 233% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1945.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10498687664 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0584602585 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540682414698 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3264150759 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.5625 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8125 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258652561605 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101300309411 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678279982215 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168233441827 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448980175018 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.