Some folks think that by penalising murderers with the capital punishment, society is also highly culpable of committing murder. So it is their view that life in prison is an ideal punishment for murderers. I do not agree with the idea. This essay will discuss on why the death penalty is far superior than the prison sentences.
On the one hand, advocates of life imprisonment insist that it is more humane and less cruel sentences than the death penalty. Because life in prison offers a person to enjoy parts of their lives, by still being able to keep in touch with their families. To add to this, some prisoners are often granted parole after being assessed by a board. In contrast during the capital punishment, many innocent people have been wrongly executed associated with a failure of lethal injections, which led to unnecessary prolonged sufferings. On the second place, this life time punishment tends to provide a complete satisfaction to victims as the suffering is chronic that can make offenders really count. Decades of decades living in a cage and being treated like animals is worse than the death penalty.
However, i strongly believe that criminals ought to get the death penalty since it acts as a powerful deterrent. For illustration, law breakers would think twice knowing that committing crimes could take their lives, compelling them not to choose the evil act. Conversely, incarcerating criminals in prison is neither punishing nor intimidating. For example, most felons have accesses to a startling array of comforts in prison, and some of them prefer to return back to prison owing to the facilities even after their releases. Hence, in order to keep society safe and instil terrible fears in the brains of every murderer, the death penalty is the only option. Next, the death penalty is imperative so as to stop the wasting of taxpayer's money. According to the study, the cost of executions per person is 10 million dollars per year. Executing criminals lessens onerous burdens of draining taxes on these violators who are not even worth the time to kill them.
In conclusion, although the capital punishment have deficiencies like the execution of uninvolved ones and ineffective injections, these can be improved by using DNA technology and seeking medical experts respectively. Considering major scares and the reduction of financial strains, life in prison is nowhere near as preferable as the death sentence.
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Essay evaluation report
prefer to return back to prison owing to the facilities
prefer to return to prison owing to the facilities
prefer to go back to prison owing to the facilities
Sentence: Hence, in order to keep society safe and instil terrible fears in the brains of every murderer, the death penalty is the only option.
Error: instil Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
No. of Words: 401 350
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 401 350
No. of Characters: 2000 1500
No. of Different Words: 236 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.475 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.988 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.652 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 142 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 112 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 73 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 53 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.05 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.119 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.55 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.285 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.458 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.077 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 303, Rule ID: SUPERIOR_THAN[1]
Message: The adjective superior is normally used with 'to'.
Suggestion: to
...n why the death penalty is far superior than the prison sentences. On the one han...
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Line 3, column 348, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
...ole after being assessed by a board. In contrast during the capital punishment, many inn...
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Line 3, column 557, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...d sufferings. On the second place, this life time punishment tends to provide a complete ...
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Line 3, column 796, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nimals is worse than the death penalty. However, i strongly believe that crimina...
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Line 5, column 457, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
...s in prison, and some of them prefer to return back to prison owing to the facilities even ...
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Line 5, column 702, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
.... Next, the death penalty is imperative so as to stop the wasting of taxpayers money. Ac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, hence, however, if, really, second, so, still, as to, for example, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2057.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12967581047 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74389697164 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583541147132 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 645.3 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9779012982 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.85 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.05 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 18.0 3.9879759519 451% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292155870256 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813477964746 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700351349163 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190097466012 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134424098353 0.056905535591 236% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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