Q16 Research says more and more business training and business meeting are taking place online Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages
Recently, the question of whether business meetings and training sessions on the Internet is beneficial has become the subject of heated debate. Some people assert that there are some advantages to participating in online business meetings, these are outweighed by the disadvantages, while others argue otherwise. Personally, I wholeheartedly agree with the former stance. In the following essay, both views will be discussed before a conclusion is reached with my opinion.
On the one hand, those who claim that workers can benefit a great deal from attending remote meetings do so for several reasons. Proponents of this argument insist that the development of technology has revolutionised the way working people can communicate with their colleagues regardless of time and place considering that having access to the Internet is the sole requirement. In addition, employees are capable of saving time as commuting to and from work deprives them of a huge amount of time that would otherwise be spent on devotion to work.
My opinion, however, is that it seems short-sighted to contend that holding online business meetings merely brings with it positives. Perhaps the principal disadvantage is that business meetings on the Internet prevent working adults from receiving instant feedback from their co-workers in person, leading them to have difficulty concentrating on their meetings. In other words, a multitude of workers are more likely to struggle to have a tight grasp of their duties, which can even exert a detrimental influence on their work performance. Furthermore, to provide a hypothetical example, if it were not for face-to-face meetings for working people, it would be nearly impossible for them to build strong relationships with their workmates as well as senior managers helping them develop interpersonal skills that will be invaluable in their future career. To be more specific, mingling with others at the workplace enables them not only to feel a sense of belonging but also to strengthen their bonds. In light of the above, I find these more persuasive.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that there are a variety of opinions about this topic. However, after considering this matter in a careful manner, I fully support the view that the drawbacks of partaking in business meetings on the Internet surpass the benefits for the reasons discussed above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a careful manner" with adverb for "careful"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, then, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2013.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33952254642 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9931521542 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567639257294 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 630.9 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.6685486189 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.2 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1333333333 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185916354855 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607507140687 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533775464027 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102013367659 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500824603854 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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