Question: Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Thanks to the inevitably developing globalization , consumers can purchase identical products all around the world , which leads to declining differences among nations. From my prospective, it's a positive trend if we can avoid or mitigate its main problem.
It could be a credible development since countries are getting closer. Because of globalization , companies have access to establishing subsidiaries all around the world so that customers are able to buy identical and formal products wherever they are. In this case, what we use are more and more resembling, which may have an influence on our life. MCDownload, for example, has endless sub-companies in the world ,where people can buy the same type of burgers. It may affect their consumption behavior and even our lifestyles. In this scenario, countries trend to be similar due to commercial or live cultures changed by some cross-nation companies, which benefits us.
Although it is a nice development for people due to a verity of same products can be brought , I believe it would be terrible that one country's cultural identity is changed or even demised by globalization. As a intangible heritage which can represent who we are , culture should be protected by people. For instance, Chinese animation industry is spoiled by other countries' because fewer domestic people don't want to watch some animations or go far as to don't support them due to its disruptive innovation and less fun. However, the myths and legends inside these animations represent our cultural gene in some case. I think it would be better if the industry gets modification to adapt to the flow but maintenance cultural gene.
To recapitulate, it's a wonderful trend that countries become similar with others with cultural identity under protection, since globalization is continuing and costumers can draw some benefits upon it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, as to, for example, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1570.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2861952862 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05597388089 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59595959596 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.384769539078 520% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8625599041 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.142857143 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219422130691 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676709333713 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489848649752 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121000692895 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0775522151538 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.