Question: Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

The question of identity and originality of every country has always been a moot point for the majority of people. In particular, it has become apparent that people feel strongly about such an aspect of the topic as differences in the range of products from different countries. I personally believe, that it is positive moment that every country has similar assortment of goods. In what comes next, I will proceed with arguments and examples in support of my stance.

While there are a number of possible ways to justify my position, one of the principal arguments in that debate is that, you can buy your habitual and favorite things wherever you are. For example, you do not have to get used to another shampoo and you can enjoy your favorite mark of chips in the four corners of the World.

A different yet particularly compelling aspect is that World brands that are spread all over the planet tend to have better quality and they should conforms to international standards that stems from that fact that international competition is much greater than within a country.

One should acknowledge that there is a certain merit on the other side of the debate. The opponent say that goods sold in the country determine its uniqueness. I find this argument without merit, it is not necessary to sell the product in the country; the main thing is to produce it there and then transport to other countries. As a result, this product will remain unique and become more available.

To sum up, I am sure that availability of certain products in every country is not only convenient aspect, but also leads to development of World economy.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 149, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'conform'
Suggestion: conform
... to have better quality and they should conforms to international standards that stems f...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, while, for example, in particular, as a result, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8475177305 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66107050122 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585106382979 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5877952926 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.916666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235539044779 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732339749134 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579538325124 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102542462189 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431989170436 0.056905535591 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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