In this contemporary epoch, people prefer shopping online to going to physical stores. This essay will further discuss both facets with appropriate examples then draw a logical conclusion.
The paradigm shift from traditional to online shopping may not only restrain the escalating unemployment rates but also generate more profit for shipping/delivery companies. In Vietnam, a large fraction of university graduates had been idle until the establishment of many freight companies, which provided those people to work as shippers, digital operations managers or graphic designers. It has been estimated that a large percentage of Asian labourers- 0,5%, are working in delivery industries. The fact that there are many employees means shipping firms may operate nationally, or even, on a global scale.
Having said that, the arrival of the online retail industry also brings some prominent drawbacks for both companies and the public. The availability and convenience of online shops is more likely to encourage impulse buying, and thus, leading to consumers’ overspending. Many people usually browse multiple shops at once, look at many products, and end up putting a plethora of superfluous items into their shopping carts. In terms of the impacts on other businesses, Vietnamese traditional outlets have observed a 30% decreasing footfall since the online retailers broke into the local market. Supposing this had not happened, the sales of brick and mortar stores would not be cannibalized now, which are currently threatening their viability and vitality
To conclude, along with a wide range of occupations created for inhabitants and rising profit for shipping firms, there are some equal concerns like threatening the traditional retail industries as well as encouraging unnecessary purchases, which cannot be neglected.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, then, thus, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67028985507 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99096123116 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673913043478 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.0062879633 49.4020404114 186% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.272727273 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0909090909 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1659346032 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641077183394 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535147576179 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0928219045294 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442249904726 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.77 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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