In contemporary society, escalating traffic congestion is an alarming concern. This may be caused by several factors as now can be mentioned together with some possible remedies offered below.
The mass automobile ownership and inconvenience of the mass transit system are two major causes of increasing traffic jams. Car has no longer been a luxurious item, which now can be purchased by people from all strata. Their size and popularity, plus the current routes which are too narrow to house a large number of them, all of which beget gridlocks. Besides, public transportations such as tram or buses have been seeing sustained reduction in patronage. This can be explained by the fact that bus operators try to make their commercially viable services viable by designing circuitous routes that pass close to as many houses as possible. This can prolong a trip, which is particularly unattractive to commuters.
Congestion-reduction measures like optimizing the bus system and using algorithms are applicable and suitable. The latter seems to be new and futuristic, but it is simply collecting data from CCTV footage, then using AI to predict potential gridlocks, traffic violations or anything that can result in congestion. Subsequently, policemen can vary the timing of traffic lights to match demand in real time, thus maximising road capacity. Besides, the authorities can apply a new model for the bus system- ring-and-spoke. This has been applied in many developed cities like Oldenburg and greatly improved the traffic flow, reduced travelling time.
To conclude, a surge in the number of cars and inefficiency of the bus network are the main reasons for rising congestion. But there are several things which can be implemented to ameliorate this.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 300, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, may, so, then, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3082437276 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08137015787 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63082437276 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0711642297 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200329495767 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662940293717 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531742066143 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125051179923 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226255754603 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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