Question: In many parts of the world, children are given more freedom than in the past. Is this a positive or negative development?
In the contemporary era, the matter of children being granted more freedom than in the past presents a multifaceted dilemma, encompassing both advantageous and detrimental effects to ponder. while proponents argue that this practice would prove to be beneficial for the youngster, some raise concerns about its alarming consequences. this essay contends that the negative effects of affording children more freedom than in the past overshadow the merits. although freedom initially facilitates individuality and originality, its adverse effects on one’s mindset and maturity should not be neglected.
On the one hand, those who view freedom as a positive solution posit that it provides youngsters with individualism. As children develop, individualism may become one of the most essential elements determining their creativity. A child who is extremely obedient and reliant on others counts for nothing in this day and age. originality and individualism are vital to a child’s social circle, if not, one of the most important factors that decide whether he or she is socially active and independent.
On the other hand, those who consider freedom as a negative development for children in this digital age believe that it might bring more consequences than benefits. offsprings might be exposed to harmful elements and inappropriate contents at a very young age. As a result, these factors may have an adverse effect on their mindset. For instance, studies have shown that there have been various cases of children using drugs and purchasing harmful substances, and the freedom and independence at a small age is mostly blamed for one of the major causes of these wrongdoings.
In my opinion, while freedom has the potential to be incredibly vital for a child’s development, it is not without risk. However, the benefits can easily outweigh the drawbacks if used wisely. For instance, granting children freedom with cautious guidance from parents may yield fundamental mindsets for their offspring to grow. The development of a child not only relies on freedom and independence, but also lies with parental aid and instructions.
In conclusion, although living with freedom can help and provide children with originality and individualism, its potential hazardous effects should not be neglected. freedom should be accompanied with parental guidance in order to secure a child’s development in the near future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2087.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56533333333 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06834041281 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541333333333 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 634.5 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7446677307 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.944444444 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241418332585 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833419958442 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0932633177258 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135101523652 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579816424845 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.