Question-Some people think that the amount of noise people make has to be controlled strictly. Others,however,say that people are free to make as much noise as they wish. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Question-Some people think that the amount of noise people make has to be controlled strictly. Others,however,say that people are free to make as much noise as they wish. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is indubitable that the level of noise is rising day by day. Increasing noise is due to invention of different items which generate noise. Some people, including I, believe that the rate of noise should reduce strictly, whereas others opine that people can make noise as their choice and should not have any strictness or laws on it.
To begin with, producing noise from vechicles and other sources such as marriage parties, industries etcetera, which make high level of noise. Due to this, it is the most common cause of noise induced hairing loss (NIHL), and also rise the level of stress. For example, a survey conducted in london, and in that survey two secondary schools were chosen by researchers. One situation is situated at busy area in which the level of noise is very high, while other school is in calm countryside location. The test is conducted on the same day, and they found that the learners of calm area perform better than other school students. Moreover, the government should impose strict laws, and also small fines for individuals who create much noise in public places or break the rules which are made by the authorities. Furthermore, it should apply rules in marriage and other parties and set a time limit for the D.J or other loud loid noise. Stretching my views further, authorities should aware individuals about the disadvantages of creating loud noise and suggest some measures to prevent from noise through social media and seminars. So,people can aware about the demerits of noise and suggest other masses.
However, some are in a view that it is the choice of the individuals that how much level of noise they want. It is the life of the person, thus in his\her life he\she have rights to do everything and others do not any need to interfere in an individual's life. For instance, firstly, while watching match it is a right of person to shout for their favourite team and support their team by playing music,dance etcetera. Secondly, in memorable occasions, such as, marriages, birthdays, anniversaries, they can enjoy on loud music by singing, dancing, etcetera. Finally, people can ride any vehicle which may create a lot of sound like a bullet, Harley Davidson etcetera for hobby or traveling.
To conclude, although loud noise is necessary in industries and factories, it is like a slow poison if we use it make on public places.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , however
...ke has to be controlled strictly. Others,however,say that people are free to make as muc...
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Line 5, column 907, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: J
... parties and set a time limit for the D.J or other loud loid noise. Stretching my...
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Line 5, column 1133, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , people
...se through social media and seminars. So,people can aware about the demerits of noise a...
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Line 7, column 168, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...the person, thus in his\her life he\she have rights to do everything and others do n...
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Line 7, column 243, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...hers do not any need to interfere in an individuals life. For instance, firstly, while watc...
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Line 7, column 402, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , dance
... and support their team by playing music,dance etcetera. Secondly, in memorable occasi...
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Line 9, column 114, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
..., it is like a slow poison if we use it make on public places.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, while, as to, for example, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2160.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 441.0 315.596192385 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89795918367 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64384895944 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528344671202 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 671.4 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4462073823 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.857142857 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.19047619048 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389350672748 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134299202971 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.181775019551 0.0667982634062 272% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.307551212014 0.151304729494 203% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.34887895312 0.056905535591 613% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.