Question:(1)
Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre,
is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead . To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Sample:(1)
These days, financial helps on art developments, including music and theatre, are considered to be less vital and waste of money, while these fundings have to be spent in public services.It seems to me that the government must cope with distribution of finance in both public services and arts.
There is a profound importance of arts in our daily life. Firstly, human kind faces with a type of arts in their life sentence and this should not stop being advanced as it encourages people positively. Secondly, without any kind of art on environment, it makes life of people quite boring. Finally, discovery new type of arts are being progressed considerably for human to make people's life more picturesque in society. AS a consequence, society have been far from dull environment by art creatures.
However, people in authority have to menage with money spending to arts, because investment on public services ought to be provided with financial supplement. On the other hand, if government lays out money on public services such as health care, improving education systems and military services, the quality of life balance would improve certainly.
In conclusion, both improvement must be expanded equally with a necessity of social contribution, as each one has significant role in people's life.
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| 2019-01-07 | tulkinjon yakubov | 56 | view |
- Ielts 11
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1101.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 211.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21800947867 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90379421518 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649289099526 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.8614148436 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.333333333 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4444444444 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5555555556 7.06120827912 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216504808722 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765773756198 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0871148644452 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136503630639 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101855948836 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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