Rapid population growth in cities has brought with it many problems. What are these problems? How can the quality of life of city residents be maintained?
There are some issues which is caused by immigration in cities. In my essay, it will reveal both current difficulties and several solutions to enhance the quality of life.
First of all, overpopulation in cities should result to many problems. The most obvious one is the heavily traffic congestion in crush hours. This means that poison gases and smoking which is thrown from private vehicles. As a result, riders and pedestrians are effected seriously, thus their quality of life are not guaranteed. In addition, more and more citizens coming to cities could cause overloading public services systems. For example, public hospitals have been over-operating. Thus, the quality of healthcare are faced struggling situations. These difficulties lead to low quality of citizen’s lives.
Although the above mentioned challenges are puzzling questions, the government, private organizations and individuals could contribute to tackle them. Solving the traffic jam in big cities in which there are overpopulation has to base on the public investment. This means the government should spend a high budget in building infrastructures such as roads, traffic lights, bridges… on other hand, public transportations have been concentrated by financing resources, simultaneously the government should ban the clear engine policies to encourage citizens refuse to use private vehicles. When traffic jam no longer appears in cities thus the air is fresh so that the quality of life must be upgraded. Moreover, private sectors should invest in healthcare industries. For example, Tam Anh Hospitals are a new brand in the healthcare line, but it is very popular for patience. Its quality in treatment meets the global standard. Founding private hospitals allow citizens to have many options and help reducing overloading situations at public hospitals.
In conclusion, overpopulation in cities should lead to diverse strugglings however there are many effective solutions to handle them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1000, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to reduce' or 'reduce'.
Suggestion: to reduce; reduce
... citizens to have many options and help reducing overloading situations at public hospit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, so, thus, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62333333333 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08827711768 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.0493333658 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7894736842 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7894736842 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.68421052632 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140848208163 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04482950794 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466597945291 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0905199640698 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280675653548 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.02 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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