This image displays the process of pineapple production.
This image displays the process of pineapple production.
the weather temperature with 23-30 o C and enthaline enables pineapple to grow up. It takes more than 12 months for the pineapple crown developing to a pineapple fruit which is 30 cm in heigh and 2 kilograms in weight when farmers could harvest them and supply to the factories.
After washing solid and watering to remove dirty components, fresh and clear pineapple fruits are directed to the production process as the key material. There are three lines in consumption of pineapples. Firstly, workers could cut the top crown and the outside layer of pineapples by physical or auto machines. Then they are move into the extracting machine to get the fruit juice.
The second one is that pineapple cartons. After cutting and removing outside layers as the first consuming way, pineapples are cut to thin pies and then to dry by the sun or drying machines. The thin dry pies are sealed in the cartons to store on the shelves.
Exporting is the third method of pineapple production. Exporters use wax machines to shine entirely to whole original pineapple fruits to meet technology standards of importing authorities. And then, they are contained to sell to overseas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...the process of pineapple production. the weather temperature with 23-30 o C and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, second, so, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1033.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03902439024 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72433674642 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624390243902 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.5941918788 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4615384615 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7692307692 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306002262481 0.215688989381 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111311600422 0.103423049105 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1826461939 0.0843802449381 216% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224109990911 0.15604864568 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.24777964271 0.0819641961636 302% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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