With the recent development in technology like e books, some people feel that printed materials like books, newspapers and magazines will soon be a thing of the past. Others feel that these forms of media will never disappear.What is your opinion?

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With the recent development in technology like e books, some people feel that printed materials like books, newspapers and magazines will soon be a thing of the past. Others feel that these forms of media will never disappear.

What is your opinion?

A lot of people believe that with the newest advancement in technology such as e books, hard copy printed papers like books, newspapers and magazines will fissile out, while others strongly believe that it can never be displaced. In my opinion, i think that with the passage of time, everything done in the world would be digitalized because people embrace whatever gives them convenience and comfort.

Before now, information are got from newspapers, advertisements are seen on magazines and students read physical textbooks, but with an improvement in technology, these are got online. For the need of convenience, a lot of people have embraced this new innovation. therefore, with just a mobile phone that has an internet access, one can read daily news which are consistently filled with the most current updates, textbooks and a variety of informative stuffs. carrying papers around has become cumbersome, so, the quest for an easier way to go around it.

Another outstanding reason why e books will be more dominant is that its is affordable. A huge sum of money is spent on study materials, news papers and magazines daily. therefore, with internet reading, the cost of obtaining these knowledge has decreased. readers also have the privilege to save their documents and return to it afterwards. They have awide range of options on what to read at a very subsidized cost.

In conclusion, with the newest trend of e books , other forms of reading and getting information will be replaced because of the need people have to read at their own conveniency and to gain knowledge at a low-cost.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 246, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... can never be displaced. In my opinion, i think that with the passage of time, ev...
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Line 5, column 250, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'innovation'.
Suggestion: innovation
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Suggestion: Therefore
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Suggestion: Carrying
...ks and a variety of informative stuffs. carrying papers around has become cumbersome, so...
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Suggestion: Therefore
...rials, news papers and magazines daily. therefore, with internet reading, the cost of obt...
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Line 9, column 227, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this knowledge' or 'these knowledges'?
Suggestion: this knowledge; these knowledges
...internet reading, the cost of obtaining these knowledge has decreased. readers also have the pr...
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Suggestion: Readers
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
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...lusion, with the newest trend of e books , other forms of reading and getting info...
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Line 13, column 205, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[1]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...wn conveniency and to gain knowledge at a low-cost.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, therefore, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07547169811 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86603533066 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615094339623 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5706482236 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.083333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226065837989 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683414386546 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836930853162 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137320808741 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0943344860947 0.056905535591 166% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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