With recent developments in technology like e-books, some people feel that printed media like books, newspapers and magazines will soon be anything of the past. Others feel that these forms of media will never disappear. What is your opinion?
Whenever electronic media and printed media come into view, it has always been a controversial topic. Some people claim that the printed media will soon disappear while others feel that it will not be wiped out of existence. From my perspective, electronic media might be more convenient; however, printed media might never lose its original value for the three following reasons.
On the one hand, despite the digitalized trend of information, the physical form of media will always retain its value. The first reason that might be worth mentioning is that people enjoy its tactile feeling. Interaction with a physical object is always more natural for humans compared to a screen. On the topic of objects, people are always more emotional towards a real object rather than its digital counterpart, therefore printed materials lovers will always be there to support them. Secondly, printed materials have a historical and nostalgic value that no modern technology can compete against. Some ancient manuscripts cannot be translated into digital form accurately. That's why printed media will be kept to preserve those ancient manuscripts. Thirdly, printed media is safer and more suitable for kinds of ages. While it's hard to control the materials that children get access to through technological devices, using the physical form of media will minimize the risk because all printed material should have gone through the process of accreditation and get approval from reliable commissions. Last but not least, the disappearance of printed materials affects individual financial growth. If you can get access to the non-charge electronic media, the publisher or author cannot get their money or wages. If they couldn’t get any money from their materials, it will also affect individual financial growth.
On the other hand, there are some points that make people agree with the replacement of printed materials with electronic ones. One of the most heated points is that printed materials can harm the global environment. The more physical form of media is needed, the more demands for materials of printing. While most of the printed media require cutting down trees, electronic media needs only a stable Internet connection.
In conclusion, I hold a firm belief that each type of material has its own merits and demerits. It depends mostly on how we use and exploit them. Even though printed materials bring us lots of beneficial aspects, electronic media should also be taken into full consideration.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...ranslated into digital form accurately. Thats why printed media will be kept to prese...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2114.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 399.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29824561404 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70630275422 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531328320802 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 647.1 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0535346597 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0909090909 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1363636364 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.40909090909 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27601645368 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895053932272 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798295382176 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181691500506 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.09394565065 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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