Recent surveys show increased interest in relocation and travel to other countries. What may be the reasons for this trend, and what will be the possible outcome from this behaviour?
Provide examples for your opinion.
Settling in abroad or travelling to other nation become a trend of nowadays, due to this, many shifted to other parts of the world or loves to go and explore other corners of the world. Better quality of life and chanes of getting new area to explore are the reasons behind this situation and boost in business and better happy life are the outcome of this.
To start with, the causes of this. First and foremost, to get good quality of living. To elaborate, in devloped countries like Canada or Japan, government provide great quality and opportunities not only for there personal life's but also, for there professional life's. Moreover, masses likes to explore other countries due to the reason, they know pretty much about there native nation where they grew up. They find other nations more attractive and this is because they decide to go outside there country and explore different part of the world. Thus, it is vivid that why people select other developed nations for there future and exploring purposes.
Moreover, there are some outcomes of this scenario; firstly owing to this, satisfaction lavel of people are increased and they it give a rise to business activities. For instance, if a person is getting excillent chances for his or her jobs and get all fundamental service then automatically his living standards will increase and this will also effects it's happiness level in a position way also; furthermore, if someone is go out to other parts of the world for exploring then, definitely he or she will use public transport and will eat or will search a place for resting like a hotel, in a result he or she spent money on this service then automatically businesses will earn more profit ib more and more people will visit and this will also beneficial for economic of a country. Hence, this type of trend benifits not only the individual but also the nation also.
In conclusion, as, this type or activity give better quality of living and exploring chances, it is also make a person more happier and in addition, economic growth of a country is outcome.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 10.4138276553 259% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81284916201 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53002475263 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511173184358 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 143.450606095 49.4020404114 290% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 143.583333333 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8333333333 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257814670932 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941536765435 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461185185843 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151158757024 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601322304032 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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