In recent time economic growth has made some people richer in both developed and developing countries .while studeis show that people in developing countries are happier now than before,people in developed countries are no happier than they were before.why do you think this is and what lessons can be learned from it?.
It is irrefutable that, in this contemporary era it is hard to differntiate of the growth of economy between developed and developing countries , because some massive from both nation become richer day by day . Studies reveled that citizens of under developing countires are spent their life in more enjoyable way as compare to past, whereas in recent times developed countries not becomig succesful in giving their citizens a happy life. This essay will highliting the main reasons for happening this situation and also discuss the outcome of scnario so that next generation learn from this.
There are two main reasons in recent times life of peiple become.happy in developing countries than past. First and formost is the accelaration of food resources and more employment opportunites. People now able to produce huge amount of food from land by using lot of fertilizer and also they are gained efficent knowlege regarding cultivation of land, become sucessful for making fertile land. Furthermore, there are more employment opportunities for people due to the education system, which is now more developed than past. Therfore, every citizen who attain a degree with vast amount of knowledge , able to get a respectabel job or starting thier own business. For example, a survey was conducted in india by indian department of education in 2019, they revealed that illteracy rate was lower than the past. Therfore, these factors play a vital role in the happiness of developing nations.
The lessons we learn is that the growth of economy in developing countries should not hamper the economy of people from developed countries. Migration of people from developing countries to developed ones should be on limited extent, because this create several deterioates , people from developed nations find hard to get job because people from other countries snatched it by doing work in less payment. These lessons should be learned by people from both nations for the own sake.
In conclusion, the facts given above explain why researcher feel that people in the developing countries are happier with the growth of global economy than the people in the developed worlds.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, regarding, so, whereas, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1826.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24712643678 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72942623311 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534482758621 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5402042282 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.428571429 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8571428571 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.435994286595 0.244688304435 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15433784132 0.084324248473 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131234592386 0.0667982634062 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.29841021777 0.151304729494 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0928979087791 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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